This is one of my "scare off the comic book reader" pages. God, what are those, WORDS? Where are the pictures? Do we need this much dialogue? What the hell?
Clinton Robert Labombard
[2006 April 28]
It's a freakin' word-balloon jungle. I'm surprised your characters weren't strangled to death.
[Transcript] - Anton and Iggy confront each other at the door. Anton begins, "Hey Ig..."
"NO!"
"Dude. I haven't asked yet."
"I SAID NO!"
"Look, she just needs a place tonight."
"GET HER A MOTEL ROOM!"
"Kinda late. What's the point?"
"THIS IS NOT A HALFWAY HOUSE!"
"Just for tonight! I promise!! She got hurt by her boyfriend."
"YOU KNOW THE CONDITIONS WE AGREED ON FOR YOU TO STAY HERE!!"
"She's not with my friends. She'll find a place to stay tomorrow!!"
"BULLSHIT!! I SAY 'YES' ONCE AND THAT'S IT.. TWO YEARS FROM NOW I'LL BE FINDING DIRTY DIAPERS AND WIC VOUCHERS UNDER MY COUCH!!"
"Look, her boyfriend roughed her up and threw her out." Shiona is listenning to all this with a concerned, innocent expression. "Her parents live in the country club. She'll go back home tomorrow."
"There's no room for her tonight."
"She's tired, look at her. Just let her sleep and get cleaned up. Come on. She's a really nice girl."
"Your nephew is staying. Where are we gonna put everyone?"
Doug yells from the truck, "HEY!! PIGEON GUY!!"
Iggy says, "Holy shit."
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The colored hair just lacks 'intimidation'... something tells me Iggy'll eventually give in.
Two vehicles and a bathtub and this is the best argument he could counter with. Like I said, that hair's the problem --he can't intimidate anyone with that hair.
